1. Circle the prepositions (of, in, about, for, onto, into)
2. Draw a box around the "is" verb forms
3. Ask, "Where's the action?"
4. Change the "action" into a simple verb
5. Move the doer into the subject (Who's kicking whom?)
6. Eliminate any unnecessary slow wind-ups
7. Eliminate any redundancies.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BhDJ-E-atm0D7c1CIVOSytQneYSJA533EOgphD8cMhc/edit
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