Draft Workshop: Retrospective Outline

Compose a retrospective outline of your partner's paper. Examine the outline for coherence, repetition, overall logic and transitions, and whether you answered the prompt. Write your notes and/or suggestions below the outline.

Second, assess whether the author's primary focus at this point should be conceptual concerns, organizational concerns, or surface-level concerns. Explain your answer with evidence from the draft.

When you have completed the workshop, turn it in here:

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